Editing for Clarity, Cadence, and Confidence
Remove filler like “very,” “really,” and “a bit.” Replace with one muscular noun or a specific image. Your reader’s attention is precious; sharpen each line until it earns its place. Post a before-and-after edit for a quick community critique.
Editing for Clarity, Cadence, and Confidence
Read aloud. Alternate sentence lengths to create breath and momentum. Let a long, textured line lead, then a short sentence land. This musicality mirrors spatial rhythm. Record yourself reading and share what you changed once you heard it.